I am a Year 4 student from Aotearoa New Zealand. This blog shows my learning journey so it is not perfect. Please comment on what I did well and what I could do to improve.
Hi Hannah. Mekilini here . First this is an amazing poem.Secondly one thing you could improve is add a little more detail .Thirdly one thing you did amazing was how you said the snow fell on the ground and then you said like snow so that was
I really like the way this picture changes and makes me reconsider what I've seen. :)
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ReplyDeletegreat poem i am so happy i could give you FB.:]
Hi Hannah. Mekilini here . First this is an amazing poem.Secondly one thing you could improve is add a little more detail .Thirdly one thing you did amazing was how you said the snow fell on the ground and then you said like snow so that was
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